Pretty Good :O
I like this. There are a few problems however. That first sound only stays on one side the entire time, if you panned it, it wouldn't be quite as annoying. Try to transition better from section to section as well. Lastly, add some sort of drums, they'll make it sound fuller.
The sounds are awesome though, keep it up. :D
thank you for the constructive criticism, i can assure you that your advice will help my songs grow into something better, thanks again
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